Fluttershy and Angel-complete-

The only thing i'd like to critisize is

A; the leg closest to the right,

B; the.. er, how should i put this.. breasts.

A - You see where the top of the leg is? Like, the line near the butterflies? it looks as if it's a seperate leg due to the shading - but maybe it's just me and my OCD.

B - They're.. a little too big to be realistic, and the breast nearest to the left sticks abit too much out of proportion if you look closely, and is also a tidbit saggier then the one closest to the right.

The last thing is, the two lines to form the breasts (meeting line and the one under her breast strap). They're fine, but as it meets the dress the shading goes around further then the meeting line, making it look slightly like a deformity.. but then again, maybe it's me and my OCD for this kind of stuff.

Apart from those three things, this is fantastic and your technique is brilliant. Very original, I'd rate this 9.7/10 (because of the three things above :3) . I LOVE the rabbit in particular. The fingers on Fluttershy have been done spectacularly. The shading is smooth and compliments the shape, and her hair makes her look totally kawaii! The tail is nice and bushy, and I love the little curl at the end <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)"/>

Sorry if I offended you in any way, but these are the points I think you should focus on. Well done, good job, and you've got yourself a watcher!